my first song

[lushtush]

this is the first song ive made on this and i wondered wat people actuelly thought well hears the link http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=158877&SongId=158913 so yeh just let me know what u think cheers

[Das]

Hi Lushtush

this is the first song ive made on this and i wondered wat people actuelly thought well hears the link http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=158877&SongId=158913 so yeh just let me know what u think cheers

Welcome to Jam Studio Forum.

I liked your song. Justifies the title.

 

[lushtush]

thank you and yeh y not haha didnt get as much options to go through like pages i wanted it to go abit more deeper but hey lol i done the best i could lol you on here often thn ??

[Das]

 

On and Off

However if you have any queries you can post them here.

JS Folks are quite helpful. They will answer your queries and help you.

Bye

 

[lushtush]

koool cheeers bye

[Ant]

Lushtush,we all work our songs in differant ways.some write with music.some just write just works.check out the forum you can find all types of help as well as idea's just ask.see you round man.-------------Ant------------ you song can be what you want it to be.how far do you wanta take it ?

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi LushTush,

 I really liked ur tune. Great Job. 

Robert

[sardonic]

Same suggestion as with Trebor's latest song:

http://www.maximummusician.com/articlechordprimer.htm

In short:
Your song is in D major
D, G and A are I, IV and V
Em, F#m and Bm are ii, iii and vi
(D Em F#m G A Bm (jamstudio doesnt have VII chords unfortunately)

Any I chord can be replaced by a iii or vi chord
Any ii chord can be replaced by a IV
Etc

So D G A D (1st page of your song) could also be F#m G A D or Bm G A D.

Adds a whole lot more variety to your songs

[doreenmmarsden]

hi lushtush , u have an ear for music as ur chords blended well. i liked your bass base bend on page 5. anyway welcome to js and ime a newbie and u will be amazed at the sounds u get. They are a good bunch of guys on here and will help u. keep up the good work doreen