Just needs something???

[atom]

Hi Guys,
Please advise this needs something,i can't work out what.
Mike (atom)


http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=153174&SongId=153239

[Ant]

here is an idea for you now finish your song lol.



                 http://www.box.net/shared/bxfdjaemn6

[Das]

Hi Atom

Just see Page 1 ( disregard the other pages ).

Check this link:

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=160195&SongId=160433

( a variation of your page1 --> I dont know if it will jam well with the other pages  --> Just an attempt sort of )

 

[sardonic]

How about a key change or at least a chord-movement change?

Every 1st chord is a C, this gets boring real fast, no matter what instrument changes you make.

C Dm Em F is I II III IV in C major, by playing II V I of any other key, you can change to that key real easily. Lets say you wanna change to F major, so start with chords in C, like C Em Dm G (i really like this progression) and then you play the II and V of F major, so Gm Bb and then youre in F major. You can complete the change by ending with the C.

1.
C Dm Em F
C Em Dm G

2.
Gm Bb F C
Gm etc (anything in F major)

3.
Dm G C to return to C major

Get it?

[Das]

Hi Atom

Just see Page 1 ( disregard the other pages ).

Check this link:

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=160195&SongId=160433

( a variation of your page1 --> I dont know if it will jam well with the other pages  --> Just an attempt sort of )

 

Afterthought:

Can possibly use Page1 as an OUTRO

[atom]

Hi Guys,
Thank you Thank you Thank you very much,you really have much more vision than I.
I have just got back and as time allows I will work on it and repost.
Thanx again.
Regards,
Mike (atom)

P.S.Ant what program do you use?