Death's Wish For the Unforgiven by Death To Self (my first song)

[Death To Self]

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=159682&SongId=159732

This is my first song so I don't know if it's good or not please comment but if your gonna be critical don't be to mean.

[Ant]

well its a good start.not bad ,but you need to finish it.and you need to know were you are going with the song! think about some girl ,some place ,about your life.and put it to works then to music.---------------------Ant

[Death To Self]

Yeah but it's kinda hard to find an ending to songs especially with this jam thing I tried

[Ant]

well i can end any song you want by fadeing it out .after you complete your song I can fade your song out for you and send it back to you as a mp3.i also noticed the you only have 1 page and you left a space out of your 4th. row.the space caused your last 3 chords of the song not to play!

[sardonic]

Dont know how to end a song? Then listen to some of the songs around here. No need to invent the wheel yourself.