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« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2009, 01:58:28 PM » |
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Nice base Ynino.  Liked the vibe. Post the lyrics will you. What is the song about? or rather what was on your mind while composing this tune? |
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« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2009, 03:30:12 PM » |
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Hi Das,
Here is the only part I've got so far:
Winter, spring and summer
always end in fall
I want to be somebody
my dreams are big
but my life is small.
etc.
Regards, Yninoarrane.
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Das
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« Reply #3 on: March 01, 2009, 04:20:53 PM » |
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Ahh ... now I get the feel of your song. |
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Das
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« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2009, 04:48:02 AM » |
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Hi Das,
Here is the only part I've got so far:
Winter, spring and summer
always end in fall
I want to be somebody
my dreams are big
but my life is small.
etc.
Regards, Yninoarrane.
Made an attempt.  HOPE Winter, spring and summer always end in fall I want to be somebody somebody who sees it all My dreams are big and I know life is short But in the time that I have I'll give it my all I work really hard I know I'm true And with divine blessings I hope my dreams come true |
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yninoarrane
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« Reply #5 on: March 03, 2009, 01:24:49 PM » |
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Hi Das, It's not bad at all , but does it fit it with the music? Take a listen at http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7383025. I made so far: Winter, spring and summer always end in fall I want to be somebody my dreams are big but my life is small. I want to be somebody I finally had my wake up call. It's a song about 'finding your true self' and the time to change. Regards, Yninoarrane. |
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Das
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« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2009, 03:30:31 PM » |
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True Ynino. Might suit Rock-Country. However your lyrics suit very well.  |
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« Reply #7 on: March 03, 2009, 04:49:44 PM » |
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Hi Ynino, I really like the song. Iis that the end of the lyrics? And is the song longer than 43 secs? I am trying to get into the thoughts of the song. For some reason I really feel it. Does the person ever fit in? Does the winter spriing... repeat as a refrain then then verse starts again? Now the rhythm is in my head  Clarence |
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yninoarrane
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« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2009, 10:24:46 AM » |
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Hi Clarence, It crossed my mind too, to reverse the first words later on in the song. Like: summer, fall and winter always end in spring. etc. Just to emphasize the change. De complete music is at: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7383016Regards, Yninoarrane. |
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ckil55
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« Reply #9 on: March 04, 2009, 12:41:20 PM » |
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Hey Ynino,
Ya know I was thinking since there is a change, Maybe it's throughout the song. Like winter spring fall end in summer and then maybe during another change in his life it ends in winter ( down time depressing era ) and then when he finally realizes that he is an individual and fits in to life his own way, it ends in spring or something. What ya think?
Just thinking
clarence
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yninoarrane
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« Reply #10 on: March 04, 2009, 05:01:19 PM » |
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Hi Clarence, I like what you're saying but according to the music (around 01:07 sec) the trumpets join in and I think we have to skip the winter-part. Futhermore I changed the 'I' to 'You', but I'm still working on it. Is it better this way? Starting at 0:11 sec Winter, spring and summer, Always end in fall. You want to be somebody, Your dreams are big, But your life is small. You want to be somebody And finally get Your wake up call Changes come and changes go It’s time for us To let it show We can reach to everybody Open your heart And let love flow ------------------ 8< ------------------ Summer, fall and winter Always end in spring We can reach to everybody Open your heart And let it sing to be continued ....... |
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« Reply #11 on: March 04, 2009, 11:35:21 PM » |
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great but i do not get it so i can't help keep on
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music is all i have
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« Reply #12 on: March 05, 2009, 12:30:33 AM » |
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Developing well we can reach out to everybody ( as against we can reach to everybody) ? |
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« Reply #13 on: March 05, 2009, 06:29:56 AM » |
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Hi Guys,
I like it so far, the lyrics are comong along nicely.
Robert
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« Reply #14 on: March 05, 2009, 10:38:47 AM » |
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Developing well we can reach out to everybody ( as against we can reach to everybody) ? I agree, but the line gets to long. Maybe: ------------------ 8< ------------------ Just reach out to everybody Open your heart And let love flow ------------------ 8< ------------------ Summer, fall and winter Always end in spring Just reach out to everybody Open your heart And let it sing OK? |
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