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Author Topic: New JamStudio WITH VOCAL: "The Blue Horizon"  (Read 345 times)
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« on: June 03, 2009, 08:13:40 AM »

I know I just posted a tune 2 weeks ago, and I don't want to overstay my welcome - but I was inspired to write another song very quickly after the last, and I got it on tape before I lost the motivation behind writing it!

This is proof that you can be inspired to write a song by just about ANYTHING   Grin

If you have Windows XP, you are familiar with the pictures available as your desktop background. One of the pics is a tiny tropical island, with a cluster of coconut palms on white sand. There is a sailboat entering the frame at the left.

One day I was looking at it, and a story quickly formed in my mind (it didn't hurt that I had been listening to a lot of Jimmy Buffett over the previous few days). I typed out some ideas, made them rhyme, then the next day sat down and recorded it.

This is the result - a little rough around the edges - but my wife says it's already her favourite song of mine. It's meant to evoke a very lazy feel, being in no hurry, taking your time.

Structurally, I purposely mixed things up a little. I threw in a few chord changes that are 'unpredictable', and I started the song on the chorus. But not by singing the chorus; by playing a slide guitar right out of the gate, then singing the chorus.

It is all JamStudio, with a slide guitar added, as well as an organ on the final chorus, both played by me and mixed in afterwards.

Hope you like it, and I hope it brings imagery to your mind......

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THE BLUE HORIZON Copyright 2009 by Mike Pilling

[Solo intro…]
[CH]
The blue horizon
Is calling me
The sun is risin’
On a distant sea

A clear blue ocean
With sky above
Feel the motion
Feel the love

[V1]
Daydreaming all about sailing
Cool fresh wind on my face
Coconut palms on the white sand
Lose the rat race

Soon we'll be cutting a clean wake
Sails all full of the breeze
Real world just made a clean break
Alone on the seas

[CH]

[V2]
As we push for our destination
The copper sun disappears
The distant joy of calypso
Starts to fill our ears

A smiling man, he takes the lines
Walks us up to the town
Some rum, some lime, some coconut wine
Good times all around

[BRIDGE]
The moon, the waves, the streets don't have names
No-one demands a thing
At sunrise we'll head back out to sea
And see what tomorrow brings

[CH]
[Solo & fade]
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My CD "OCTOBER SKY":   Time For Rain   We Got It Good   Journey To Centre Bay   October Sky   A Lazy Afternoon   Goodbye My Friend   One More Thing   Walkin The Talk   California On My Mind (1976)   Slow Down

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« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 09:57:08 AM »

Strat, well done my friend, Jimmy Buffett got nothing on you bro! well written, very relaxing, nice slide guitar (tasteful), it works for me strat, really nice piece, Late Roneno
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« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 10:49:10 AM »

Great song Mike !

Makes me want to head over to the beach with a bucket of Coronas   Grin   It's my favorite of yours so far....Nice work !

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« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2009, 12:35:01 PM »

Drowned in the ways of the world, every once a while we need a break !

This song emphasizes that !

Good stuff !

Really liked the guitar work in this one !
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« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2009, 01:49:27 PM »

hola, your voice reminds me of TOM PETTY, this is a great song bud,  rave on,  woohoo freefalling
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« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2009, 09:41:31 PM »

gives a laid-back feelin which is somethin i need now Grin
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« Reply #6 on: June 04, 2009, 01:36:36 AM »

Strat, I love every aspect of this song. Love the guitar work, your voice is excellant. Found myself wishing the song wouldn't end. I agree with your wife, i think this is the best i've heard from you. Thanks for sharing! Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: June 04, 2009, 09:57:09 AM »

Thanks, to each and every one of you.

You are all very gracious.

-Mike
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« Reply #8 on: June 08, 2009, 07:59:57 PM »

nice sound Mike as always------------------Ant-----------you old coot lol.
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« Reply #9 on: June 08, 2009, 08:53:29 PM »

Wow thats a great work of art!  And dont worry your not "overstaying" your welcome
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« Reply #10 on: December 11, 2011, 03:27:49 AM »

This is one of the best Jam Studio songs I've heard.  Well done!
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« Reply #11 on: December 12, 2011, 02:29:37 AM »

Hey Mike... I'm with dave and that bucket of Coronas... and you're welcome to join us anytime. Smiley Great slide guitar man.  Cool Cool
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Through the void
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