Ghostly Traces final master (updated: 2-2-2011

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi All,

 You may have heard the tune called "nullify" that i was working on. Well, I now call it "Ghostly Traces". I am looking for anyone who would like to collaborate on this project for writing, singing and lead guitar. I started to write some lyrics but got a little stuck.

I need lyrics for 2nd verse. start point is 1:15, end point is 1:36

lyrics also needed for a bridge. start point 2:31, end point is 2:50

also need lead guitar part. starts at 2:07, ends 2:30

if you feel you need to write a 3rd verse, let me know and we will try our best to accomadate.

I also am looking for a singer when the lyrics are completed. I will except as many lyric writers and singers that want to collab.

If you decied to join in the fun, as a singer or lead guitar player, please record your part on a track/file by it's self. I will contact singers that join after the lyrics are completed.

here is the referance track with  vocal http://www.box.net/shared/rhs55g7g8v updated - harmony vocals added

here is the backin track without the vocal referance. http://www.box.net/shared/ohaax54qer

Lookin forward to working with you!

Robert

Update: Song is now finshed and complete. This song was written with 80% Jam Studio and 20% Magix Music Maker, I am singing the lead vocal and the lead guitar is my friend John "Tiger Ant" from Jam Studio forums. Lyrics co-written with my friend Richard "Ripamo" also from Jam Studio forums.

http://iacmusic.com/songs.aspx?SongID=84192&ArtistID=108068

[ripamo]

Tre,
Woud you post the lyrics you have so far?

[RobertLeeHall]

Tre,
Woud you post the lyrics you have so far?

verse 1
Everytime I look in the mirror
All I can see, is you
I wish it would, get clearer
I need a change from grey skys to blue

chorus
World winds blowing in my mind
Your voice echos thru the hall
Ghostly traces left behind
of you, when you use to call


Robert

[ripamo]

Here is an idea I put together with what you have done so far, what do you think?

Verse 1
Every time I look in the mirror
All I can see, is you
I wish it would, get clearer
I need a change from gray skies to blue

Chorus
Whirl winds blowing in my mind
Your voice echoes thru the hall
Ghostly traces left behind
of you, when you use to call

Verse 2
Cool breezes inviting me
My heart holds me here
Walking places we use to see
Is something I can’t bare

Chorus
Whirl winds blowing in my mind
Your voice echoes thru the hall
Ghostly traces left behind
of you, when you use to call

Bridge (Back up singer)
Broken hearted
Now we’re parted (repeated throughout bridge)

Bridge (lead vocals)
My heart aches
Really aches for you (sung once slow through bridge)

[RobertLeeHall]

wow Rip,

 these are very good!

Robert

[brianeno]

Hey Robert, I like the lyrics you have, they have a good feel to them. I have got to get a couple of other things off the ground but I'm down to do vocals/lyrics as needed. Late eno

[ripamo]

Savanah and I were playing with it and she came up with a new bridge that sounds much better then what I wrote here is the whole thing w/new bridge.

Verse 1
Every time I look in the mirror
All I can see, is you
I wish it would, get clearer
I need a change from gray skies to blue

Chorus
Whirl winds blowing in my mind
Your voice echoes thru the hall
Ghostly traces left behind
of you, when you use to call

Verse 2
Cool breezes inviting me
My heart holds me here
Walking places we use to see
This is something I can’t bare

Chorus
Whirl winds blowing in my mind
Your voice echoes thru the hall
Ghostly traces left behind
of you, when you use to call

Bridge
My heart aches for you
My heart aches for you

Verse 1
Every time I look in the mirror
All I can see, is you
I wish it would, get clearer
I need a change from gray skies to blue

[Omega]

would love to help here Robert, but i think you've got it covered. anyways willing to help if ya need it   

[RobertLeeHall]

would love to help here Robert, but i think you've got it covered. anyways willing to help if ya need it   

Hi Omega,

 Please do help! I would like to have several versions/takes from differant singers and guitarist. 

Robert

[RobertLeeHall]

Hey Robert, I like the lyrics you have, they have a good feel to them. I have got to get a couple of other things off the ground but I'm down to do vocals/lyrics as needed. Late eno

Hi Brianeno,

 I want everyone to know that nothing has been set in stone yet. You are more than welcome to make any changes you see fit. lyrics and/or vocals. Look forward to hearing what you come up with. 

Robert

[Ant]

  I'll see if I can put a little something in the mix Robert.

[ripamo]

Hey Robert, I like the lyrics you have, they have a good feel to them. I have got to get a couple of other things off the ground but I'm down to do vocals/lyrics as needed. Late eno

Hi Brianeno,

 I want everyone to know that nothing has been set in stone yet. You are more than welcome to make any changes you see fit. lyrics and/or vocals. Look forward to hearing what you come up with. 

Robert

Yes first don't mean best
Ripamo

[RobertLeeHall]

I'll see if I can put a little something in the mix Robert.

much appreciated John 

p.s. can u sen a file with the guitar on a track by itself also. thanks

Robert

[RobertLeeHall]

Hey Robert, I like the lyrics you have, they have a good feel to them. I have got to get a couple of other things off the ground but I'm down to do vocals/lyrics as needed. Late eno

Hi Brianeno,

 I want everyone to know that nothing has been set in stone yet. You are more than welcome to make any changes you see fit. lyrics and/or vocals. Look forward to hearing what you come up with. 

Robert

Yes first don't mean best
Ripamo

hi Rip  sometimes true. ur lyrics are awesome and i plan on making several final takes and then we can all see how they all  turn out. 

Robert

[Ant]

  try this Robert:  http://rapidshare.com/files/408306784/guitar.wav



Robert it only runs from 2:07-2:30 and a little at the end lol