Missing you

[Omega]

This song was inspired by Mike Skiboshski called Missing you. I would like the thanks Mike for the use of Title named Missing you which is the most important part of the song its the hook.

Also i would like to thanks Downward Decent for the use of his lyrics for the Rap section in this song.


http://www.box.net/shared/v7q6r6bvec have changed the drum break at the rap section

Lyrics Copyright by Glenn Albert / Downward Decent / Mike Skiboshski

Missing you

Verse1
Lately ive been crying
over you
Every thing I feared
Has come true
Picking up the fragments
to this torn, shattered, broken heart
Trying to stitch the pieces
now where do I start

Chorus
Ive been missing you
(Oh) I miss you
Ive been missing  you
(Oh) i miss you
How many times
Must I say, I was wrong
Give me a little hope
something to hold on to

Verse2
Lost and confused
Im Feeling used and abused
Love spent a life time to build
seconds to end  my world
I cant fight back these tears
Ive Just realized my fears
Stranded here a broken man
How will I ever mend

Chorus
Ive been missing  you
(Oh) I miss you
Ive been missing  you
(Oh) i miss  you
How many times
Must I say, I was wrong
Give me a little hope
something to hold on  to

Rap
Time gone by, Led me astray
Now you’ve moved on
Never to be the same
I can’t tell If it I’ll be okay
But that’s the price
That Everyone pays
How far you’ve come
Just to end it this way
Fates intertwined
No longer means a thing
This memory will fade
The roses wilt away
And this passion that we shared
Can’t not be found again
Those Lies exchanged oh Vanity
Now you’re gone pure Tragedy

Verse 3
How do I go on
When I'm feeling this way
You are my life 
The air I breath
No clandestine magic
Can heal this pain
You’re the one and only
Who can redeem my name

Chorus
Ive been missing  you
(Oh) I miss you
Ive been missing  you
(Oh) i miss  you
How many times
Must I say, I was wrong
Give me a little hope
something to hold on

 

[wyotryot]

Really like the track Omega, and the lyrics pretty well too.
Couple suggestions?
Verse3 - find a stronger root for this verse (or a mellower feel to verse 1&2?), it will pick up the pace once more as the drum breaks then rap help pick up the pace earlier.
drum break - drop it between verse3 and the following chorus.
Just thinking about dynamics - and again, it's my thoughts and not a criticism.

[Omega]

Really like the track Omega, and the lyrics pretty well too.
Couple suggestions?
Verse3 - find a stronger root for this verse (or a mellower feel to verse 1&2?), it will pick up the pace once more as the drum breaks then rap help pick up the pace earlier.
drum break - drop it between verse3 and the following chorus.
Just thinking about dynamics - and again, it's my thoughts and not a criticism.

Verse3 - find a stronger root for this verse (or a mellower feel to verse 1&2?) well spotted wyo this was an area i had trouble with musical verse 1 & 2 i original dropped 2 instruments out of verses 1&2 then decide to put it back in.

And your correct because to me it sound continual through the verse and chorus the only difference being pianos in verse and guitars in chorus. I was hoping to get away with the drum rolls in between breaking up the sound of continuity oh well guess ill have to work on it.

Appreciate the comment wyo you've clarified what i should have done in the first place.

[Mike Skiboshski]

uhhh...
good song.
I feel like I got the short end of the stick...
but its cool.

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi Omega,

 Love the track... waiting with enticipation to hear vocals. 

Robert

[Rod]

Wow, what a beauty, you really can paint a picture with your music!!!!

[Omega]

uhhh...
good song.
I feel like I got the short end of the stick...
but its cool.

Short end of the stick but the biggest part of the song mike the inspiration from your lyrics and the main part of any song the hook.

[Omega]

Hi Omega,

 Love the track... waiting with enticipation to hear vocals. 

Robert

Once this flu has gone Robert ill start cracking those vocal chords, just hope the cracking does come through on the mic lol

[Omega]

Wow, what a beauty, you really can paint a picture with your music!!!!

Thanks Rod just wish my vocals would paint the same way lol

[Dave H]

Excellent track Omega !........nice job on the mix too .....one of the best JS songs I've heard !!!.......

Dave

[bnegenman]

Cool man, i am curious to hear the final result.

[Omega]

Thanks to all for the comments and Dave thanks for the ego boost now i have to turn sideways to get my head through the door .

[ripamo]

This really is a good tune...did i miss it or are the vocals not done yet?

[Omega]

thanks rip and no you haven't missed the vocals version still yet to arrive

[Das]

This is one excellent composition. Keep it coming Om.