New Lyrics

[Simple Voice]

Here are the lyrics Im currently working on:

[verse 1] The walls 'round me crumble.
Everytime I close my eyes,
I feel my heart slipping away.
Guess that's just the price I pay

[chorus] to feel your arms around me,
to look in your eyes
an' know you're mine,
time after time.

[verse 2] You've stolen my mind,
my heart's next in line.
So hold me tight tonight,
everything's gonna be alright.

[chorus]

[verse 3] If this is just a dream,
I don't wanna face reality,
rather keep you by my side
an' live in make believe paradise.

[chorus]

[verse 4] Addicted to your love,
do anything, 'cause I can't get enough.
Gladly give my heart away,
that's just the price I pay.



Personally me, I am not happy with the chorus.... Any suggestions?

[UnBorn Dayz]

to look in your eyes
i feel your shine
it eluminates me time after time
that i know that you are mine

idk i just had this at the top of my head, hope it helps

[Simple Voice]

Hmmm.... not really what I'm looking for....

[UnBorn Dayz]

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