Song Idea

[Simple Voice]

Ok... I had a little bit of random inspiration the other day... but I need help.

The song idea is... about being played and deceived, but not minding. You know... that one girl who always runs back to the player, not seeming to care about getting hurt, knowing thats whats gonna happen..

I only got a couple little parts so far...

"Every time I fall,
will you catch me at all?
Or just tease me, entice me,
never let me be."

"Play with me,
toy with me,
tie my heart in a knot,
give it all you've got."

"The walls 'round your heart,
they'll never break apart,
but still I try,
watching my life pass by."

"Bathe in my tears,
let them wash away all your petty fears.
Use my pain, get your fix,
after all, it's just for kicks."

any help?

[Crystal]

I like this very much. I know the pain of being played over and over again, its not fun. I have a song that I wrote about it. I'll post it up, perhaps it maybe of use to you or perhaps it will inspire you.


Not another day

Ooh Ooh
Ooh

Not another day
Not another day
Crying for you
I’m not spending
Another day
Not another day
Crying over you
Oh oh

I sit here crying
Over you
As foolish as it sounds
I’m still not over you

You have hurt me
Not being here
Running with different women
Its all so unclear
And like a fool
I’m here crying
Over you

Not Another day
Not Another day
Crying over you
I’m trying to get past it
And I’m not wasting my time
Thinking about you

I’m running in circles
Ending back where I began
Trying to see past your lies
Trying to hold back my cries
As I watch you from my window
Walking away

And though I try to hide it
I still miss you
You were a part of me
A part of my heart
Now you gone running
To another girl
I hope you realize
You were my world

Not Another day
Not Another day
Crying over you
I’m trying to get past it
And I’m not wasting my time
Thinking about you

Here I am crying on the floor
What am I here for?
You were my everything
Now I have nothing
You were my world
I was so proud to be your baby girl
Now its over
And I don’t know what to do
I guess I guess I’ll save it for another day

Not Another day
Not Another day
Crying over you
I’m trying to get past it
And I’m not wasting my time
Thinking about you

Not Another day
Not Another day
Crying over you
I’m trying to get past it
And I’m not wasting my time
Thinking about you

I miss you


I have other songs that I wrote about my experiences, but I probably shouldn't put them up because they are raw and edgy and use adult language. Lol. This is the one I have up and posted on youtube. If you'd like to check it out my username is babymama10212008. The video is the same title as the song.

Hope this helps.

[Simple Voice]

Thanks...

Yeah, I just dealt with this guy... he was a friend of my brother's and he seemed like a really cool nice guy. we've been 'friends' for at least a couple months now... flirting and all that and it really seemed like he really liked me. Then bout a week ago, he stopped talking to me and started ignoring me. Last night, he said some really messed up stuff to me then deleted me off his friend's list on Facebook... I'm still in a bit of shock... I just can't believe he did that... I'm disappointed in myself for falling for it, too...

[wyotryot]

People can be like that
Perhaps just take the advice of Cee-Lo Green...

Link removed due to lyrical content......sorry Wy....Dave H

Hope it helps you feel better

[wyotryot]

My apologies DAveH, I wasn't thinking.

[Mischievous]

People can be like that
Perhaps just take the advice of Cee-Lo Green...

Link removed due to lyrical content......sorry Wy....Dave H

Hope it helps you feel better

OmG that post broke my heart...
I love that song...