Father (with vocal by JKenny)

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi all,

 I know this working title is the same as a song I posted earlier (as when I messed up and posted Wyot's song) but here it is.

Also JKenney is writing lyrics to it as well. The song is an inspiraional contemporary tune called...

Father

Robert

[wyotryot]

that is the best tune I've heard on JS in the last few months. major WOW factor on this Robert. Absolutely looking forward to the collab with JK! Thank you for that.

[Dave H]

Wow !!......Robert, this is Fantastic !.....totally professional quality.....and more important than that, it is brilliantly composed, and is just as beautiful as can be...... Take a bow brother.....you just set the bar even higher for all of us.......

Dave

[RobertLeeHall]

 TY Wyot and Dave, Your kind comments  are much appreciated. It may take some time to complete as Joe and I are in no hurry to rush this.

I would also like to thank Emjay. This post was originally in the "Show Us Your Stuff" and Emjay left a very nice comment which was lost when moved to this thread.

Robert

[Omega]

All i can say is wow Robert and supreme comes to mind . Id like to quote Rod(Ramolly) you can paint a picture with your music. i guess i was a little hard for me to spot it on my own music, probably because i was focused more on the vocalizations. But with this track i can truly understand what he meant, as this song breaths life through the music, and creates a clear cut picture in mind.


Brilliant Track bud. And i know its gonna be even great when JK gets the lyrics on board.

[ripamo]

Amaizing

[LooknGlass]

This awesome trebor999! So good and fluent and I love the feel to it. Great job man, great job!

[Das]

Excellent as always...expected of you.

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi All.

 Joe has been gracious enough to collab with me on this song. He has completed the lyrics and vocal track which I have now finished the 1st version.
I am also working on a 2nd version which will have better harmony vocals as well.

<a href="http://www.box.net/embed/s1o7k8fzmmn8e7q.swf" target="_blank">http://www.box.net/embed/s1o7k8fzmmn8e7q.swf</a>

Robert

[Dave H]

Wow !!!!.......guys.....that gave me chills !!!!!.......totally Awesome......I can't wait for the new harmonies......this is Fantastic !......

Dave

[wyotryot]

that's coming along beautifully. very solid.

[jkenney]

the mix is sounding pretty cool robert

[jkenney]

Robert asked that i post the lyrics so here they are.

v1. It's been so long,since i've been on my own
     so many times,feeling all alone
     as i lived each day,memories of you come my way
v2. I found that i can't talk the talk no more
     I found that i must walk the walk for sure
     now i want to walk my way back to you
     because everything you've taught me,oh has come true
     (chorus)
     father i'm praying would you please forgive me
     father i'm praying would you please redeem me
     father now i know just what your promise means
     my blind eyes now see
     (bridge)
     a comfort comes over me
     i feel a love i use to feel
v3. Now i know, i need you by my side
     it feels so good just to know
     you'll be my guide
     through the lows and through the highs
v4. no matter how far i run, i turn around your there for me
     no one other could ever equal your love for me
     there was a time my pride got the best of me
     what was once so hard,is now so easy
     (chorus 2)
     Father God thank you for your mercy
     Father God i know now you want the best for me
     i use to think you were about controling me
     i was so crazy
(repeat chorus 2)

[Omega]

This is awesome Robert and JK. I love the vocal melody you create in all your songs JK, always strong sense of flow and punchy in the correct spots.


Kudos Robert/JK and anyone else involved 

[jkenney]

Thanks for the compliments omega. I'm looking forward to hearing roberts finished track