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Shannon(guitarplayer)
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Without you I am nothing
Heart
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September 04, 2010, 09:01:04 PM »
Okay I'm sorry I haven't been around alot guys I've been busy lately but I have a new poem/song I'm working on
My heart pounds
it bursts at it's seams
it doesn't matter what I do
this pain always clings
say what you will
everything will be different the next day
you had to tell me one word bfore I left
now i'm a bloody mess
I thought my heart would stop
I was holding it in
i have this entire time
none of you see my pain
it's okay you don't have to
I'm gone anyways
what does it matter
I only cry bfore I
sleep bcuz ur in my dreams every night
memories that I wish I could forget
and memories I wish you could remember
I kno I'm mean and sarcastic with you
but I only care
I pretend to be mean and sarcastic bcuz it makes you laugh
and that brightens my heart
it let's me see
how much you mean to me
and how much my heart bursts out of it's seams
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Dave H
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Re: Heart
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September 05, 2010, 06:45:07 PM »
Hi Shannon !.......Excellent lyrics !.......I'm glad you're still around, lately it's mostly been just us old folks in here.....lol.....
Dave
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wyotryot
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September 05, 2010, 06:56:50 PM »
And us old folks just need to hear from you young'uns to teach us what's up.
Good poeming, Shannon. Separation anxiety to the max!
keep breathing, girl, you'll find new buds soon.
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"Find out who you are and do it on purpose." - Dolly Parton
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7H_AysErbBE
Shannon(guitarplayer)
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Without you I am nothing
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September 05, 2010, 07:48:39 PM »
I'll never give up hope bcuz "life is suffering"
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Omega
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September 06, 2010, 02:29:14 AM »
I love the way you open up here shannon, its guaranteed to soothe the soul and brighten the heart.
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wyotryot
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September 06, 2010, 05:10:36 AM »
life is also love, laughter, and lots of fun. You can't have one without the other.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7H_AysErbBE
Shannon(guitarplayer)
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Without you I am nothing
Re: Heart
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September 06, 2010, 11:04:36 AM »
That's true Wyo
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Rod
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September 06, 2010, 01:04:14 PM »
good job
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Shannon(guitarplayer)
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Re: Heart
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September 06, 2010, 03:29:05 PM »
Oh wow duh I completely forgot to thank you all for the comments
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