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« on: October 17, 2010, 02:33:38 AM »

recently I decided to write poems so I thought I should share a few...

The old tree,
How it enchants me,
Ever getting older.

Of course one day its life will end,
Lonely and sad,
Death comes...

Two thousand years later,
Rolling on the centries
Ending its life,
Entering the next.

I will post more Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2010, 07:05:52 PM »

This is great post some more Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2010, 08:17:00 PM »

yeah post some more!!!
I'm working a a project were I am writing 100 hiakus!!!
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« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2010, 10:35:25 PM »

Nice work tommy !..... Cool

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« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2010, 12:15:22 PM »

thanks guys!!  Grin                      here is another:

Lightening flashes,
Rain lashes,
Thunder crashes,
Sky as black as night.

Deers take a fright,
Birds take to the air in flight,
Not a single soul in sight.

Over meadows and streams,
Wind sreams,
Trees dangerously creak and sway,
Dogs bay,
What a storm to have in the middle of May!

As you watch,
Seas froth,
Feeling the natures wrath.
White horse rise from the sea and crash towards the trembling shore,
Throw back their heads and roar.

At last the storm passes,
The cows resume grazing in the long grasses.
Nature seems to have its fill,
For now the plains are still.

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« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2010, 01:05:23 PM »

I really like this one !......brilliant use of descriptive phrases !..... Cool

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« Reply #6 on: October 21, 2010, 12:50:11 AM »

feel free to post any poems you have made here Smiley

Slowly the firw takes to the air,
Awed, you stare
Beautiful and bright,
Red and yellow flames lick in the night.

Tongues of flame leap and roar,Tthere is much to store,
Firey and tall,
They light up the glommy hall.


From the deep scarlets to the mellow yellows,
It bellows,
Great is the hunger,
But it is quick to anger.

The logs disingrate,
Its hunger needs to be kept up to date,
With utmost hunger and hate,
Burned logs soon meet their fate.

As tht flamees reached their peak,
Suddenly there is a ghastly gas leak,
And explodes,
relaseing an ash load.

Now the afternoon is getting late,
There is a debate,
Whether to keep the fire alive,
Or to let the fire thrive.

Without much ado a decision is made,
For the fire to fade,
In the end, the flames sputter and die,
And where the logs lie Is just a dash of ash.
 
 
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« Reply #7 on: October 21, 2010, 07:33:04 PM »


Well, my poems are my lyrics...
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« Reply #8 on: November 19, 2010, 12:10:30 PM »

Memories will fade
Acceptance is needed
Reminiscing is your habit
It's not good, that must be Vanished,
In order to forget him
Move on and Never turn your back again.

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« Reply #9 on: November 20, 2010, 07:35:45 PM »

My heart aches
It breaks
Soul is ripped apart
I dont know what to do
I cat even talk to you
Its hurting me
Hurting you
Your injuries are
So distracting to me

All those we laughed
Is but a memory
Can i say we're friends that weren't meant to be...
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« Reply #10 on: November 21, 2010, 12:14:24 AM »

frozen trees shiver,
white mountains frozen rivers,
come on sun, get up!
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« Reply #11 on: November 21, 2010, 01:53:47 AM »

tommy, Mike, Shannon.....you are brilliant poets....keep on writing....the words you write.... inspire Music !!... Cool

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« Reply #12 on: November 21, 2010, 10:01:09 AM »

Two lamplights light up in the dark,
There sounds a low bark,
2 black pointy ears flick to and fro,
watching creatures come and go.
Sense of smell is great,
With it it sniffs out the perfect mate.
From a low growl to a bark and bay,
It likes to sleep during the day.

I say,
dog you need new claws and jaws!
For yours are threadbare and raw,
The recluse dog snarls in answear and withdraws,
Its shadowy form melting into darkness.




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« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2010, 07:12:13 PM »

Remember the days and that one night?
Remember the notes we passed remember when you cried?
Remember the stupid things we used to laugh at remember when you hated me that time?
Please remember the good and forget the bad remember who I am and not what I've done
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« Reply #14 on: November 22, 2010, 12:09:45 PM »

Here is one I made up some years ago:

Detentions are boring,
as well as annoying,
teacher like a hawk,
Makes sure you do not sit and gawk.

( I got in so much trouble when the teacher caught me writing this! Grin)
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