Anybody not too busy?

[Simple Voice]

I have yet another song. I think it might need a little work to help make it flow better, but hey it's just a rough draft and that's what they're for, right?

Anyways, if anybody would like to take a look at it if they are not too busy and see what they can do, I will post the lyrics. I think of it as a more slower,l softer simple tune, but I'm not sure. It's a love song and hopefully its at least semi decent.

If anyone is interested, then just message me or reply in this topic.

Please and thank you,
Kaitlin Storm 

[Dave H]

Hi Kaitlin !.....can you post a link to your song for us ?......

Dave

[Simple Voice]

Here's the lyrics.. which are all I got...

(Verse One) When I look your way,
I can’t find the words to say,
searching through my mind,
wondering how could I be so blind…

(Chorus) Pushing you away so long,
now I finally found where I belong.
In your arms, I wanna stay,
you and me, wouldn’t want it any other way.

(Verse Two) When you look at me and smile,
my pain fades for awhile,
and I’m not afraid to fall,
I know you’ll be there through it all.

(Chorus) Pushing you away so long,
but now I know I belong
in your arms, forever and a day,
couldn’t have it any other way.

(Verse Three) Trying to find a reason why
to smile even when I wanna cry,
I hear your voice, look in your eyes
and it’s no surprise:

(Chorus) pushing you away so long,
who would have known, we belong
together, forever and a day,
won’t let anything get in our way.

(Bridge) Before we get lost in life’s trance,
I say love deserves a chance.

 ‘cause I know, (in background, softer?)

(Verse Four) when the world crashes all around me,
I know just where you’ll be
and where I’ll run
when everything’s finally said and done…

(Chorus) Pushing us closer all along,
this is where we belong.
No more running away,
in your arms, may I always stay? (voice fades away)

© Kaitlin Storm, 2010   "Smart now this is the way you should do you lyrics and music."  Ant

[brianeno]

Kaitlin, this is a well done song young Jedi! You really brought it here, and your style is blossoming. I'm really impressed! I need to finish your last one before I bite off anymore, I finally got the young woman to stop by for the music CD and lyrics so we need to give her a week or two to work with it, but it should be done soon. Sorry, I have been working with others and on some of my own stuff. I will be posting one of my new songs tonight so give it a listen, ok? Bye Kaitlin, late, eno