Help! I need a singer!

[Crystal]

I have lyrics and backing music! I lack the capacity to get the sound/emotion needed out of my voice to sing this song. The song is based on something my dad would say when I threw a pity party for myself because something didn't go the way I wanted or what not. He would put his finger and thumb together and play like a violin or he would rub his forefinger and thumb together and say "This is the world smallest record player/violin playing 'My heart bleeds for you!'" That would just get me more upset and I would say, "You don't love me or You're so mean!" Well that song is about just that.

Here are the lyrics:

Verse 1

My heart bleeds for you
Honestly I do
Have some sort of feeling
Remorse? Is that what it is?
Somehow my heart feels
Sorry for you
Although my actions
Prove otherwise
My heart still bleeds for you
Through your trying times
Can’t help but to feel
A little sorry, sorry sorry

Chorus 1
Here’s the world smallest violin
Playing “my heart bleeds for you.”
Cause it does
Even if its just a little bit
My actions say something else
Like I don’t care
But deep down, my heart bleeds for you

Verse 2

You say I’m callus
I have no feeling
For what you’re going through
But really I do
My hearts bleeding for you
But we all go through times
Just like this
I’ve been through it
No one shed a tear for me
My heart bleeds for you
Really it does.
Sorry sorry sorry

Chorus 2

Here’s the worlds smallest record player
Playing “My Heart Bleeds for you”
Really it does
Even if it’s a little bit
Even if I say something else
Like I don’t care
Deep down inside, my hearts bleeding for you.

Bridge

Gotta pick yourself off the ground
Out of the river you’re crying
Gotta build that bridge
Gotta get over that thing somehow
You need to learn in life
No ones going to feel sorry for you
How my heart bleeds for you!

Chorus 1

Here’s the world smallest violin
Playing “my heart bleeds for you.”
Cause it does
Even if its just a little bit
My actions say something else
Like I don’t care
But deep down, my heart bleeds for you


Here is the track (I can't make it into a MP3 anymore, my six month subscript is up Sad day)

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=756732&SongId=756891


It seems a little long...so you can cut it for length purposes. You can pretty much do whatever you like with the song as well. All I know is that my voice is no more from trying to sing this song. Happy New Year Everyone!

[Crystal]

Okay...I think I figured this thing out...I used a different track that I made a while back and fit this song to it...it sounds good from what I can hear.

Tell me what you guys think?

http://www.box.net/shared/gnv0dac8ir

[Dave H]

That's great !......a little EQ in the mixer may be all it needs .......

Dave

[Omega]

love the compotsitions and the vocal melody is brilliant i love the way the vocals portrays an Empathetic vibe awsome stuff

[jkenney]

Good melody and vocal writing here. Good job all around, thanks for sharing

[brianeno]

Nice tune, different, of course I like that! iIt needs a little definition to bring out the instrumentation, but I really like it.  Maybe Daves right, a little EQ  would probably do the trick. Good luck, Late, eno