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Das
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« on: February 25, 2011, 05:35:18 PM »


Turn
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clocks tick
tick tick tick
tick tick ticked

tides turn
turn turn turn
turn turn turned

fires burn
burn burn burn
burn burn burned

and the world turns
turns turns turns
turns turns turns



the stars stray
stray stray stray
stray stray strayed

my heart prays
prays prays prays
prays prays prays

so please make my day
day day day
day day day

day day day
day day day



It feels like home
home home home
home home home

Now I'm not alone
alone alone alone
alone alone alone

locked lips
lips lips lips
lips lips lips

and I loved your kiss
kiss kiss kiss
kiss kiss kiss



and the world turns
turns turns turns
turns turns turns

and the fires burn
burn burn burn
burn burn burn

and the world turns
turns turns turns
turns turns turns

and the fires burn
burn burn burn
burn burn burn
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« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2011, 09:04:31 PM »
Cool Das !.......... Cool Cool

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« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2011, 03:12:16 AM »
well done
done done done
done done done

guess you had fun
fun fun fun
fun fun fun

Grin
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« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2011, 04:15:15 AM »

 Grin Thanks Dave, Om. Grin
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« Reply #4 on: March 06, 2011, 08:16:49 PM »
Very cool Das, different...but you know i like that! Late, eno
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« Reply #5 on: March 09, 2011, 09:31:47 AM »

 Grin Thanks Ron...appreciate it !
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« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2011, 11:08:10 AM »
I like the simplicity, yet convaying a more complex overall meaning. Would be nice to hear a vocal melodly with music.  Smiley

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