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Simple Voice
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« on: March 20, 2011, 08:47:50 PM »

If anybody is interested or has the time, I have some more lyrics that need a tune and vocals. I'm thinking.. kinda more punk style (think AVril Lavigne type) and a girl for vocals, maybe a guy for the background parts....

Well, here are the lyrics...

(Verse 1) Gotta keep my feelings bottled in, {so numb}
can't let them show.
Gotta put on a smile, {so cold}
so no one knows.

(Chorus) You ask if everything's okay,
I just smile and turn away,
{trying to hide the tears}
'cause you can't see
the broken part of me.

(Verse 2) Blocking out the world, {so numb}
hiding within the light,
'cause monsters lurk in the dark, {so cold}
they're hiding within the night.

(Chorus) They say everything's okay,
but all I ever wanna do is run away,
{trying to hide the fears}
'cause they won't see
the broken part of me.

(Verse 3) Pushed and pulled every other way, {so numb}
I'm just giving in to get out.
Surrounded by a see of faces, {so cold}
tell me what it's all about.

(Chorus) Tell me everything's okay,
or maybe I'll just fade away,
{trying to hide from the stares}
oh, won't you please see
the broken part of me.

(Bridge) Life's a roller coaster ride every day,
when everything's going the wrong way.

(Verse 4) Left with no bridges to burn, {so numb}
spun around and around,
carried on waves of pain, {so cold}
I'm left broken on the ground.

(Chorus) Can't believe everything's okay,
'cause I'm falling away,
{hoping somebody hears}
but they'll never see
the broken part of me... [fades away]

© Kaitlin Storm

{ } means background...... [ ] is what the lyrics do...
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« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2011, 05:10:20 PM »

Just want to say: Love the lyrics  Grin!
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« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2011, 03:17:35 PM »

That a way Kaitlin, you are developing into quite the lyricist, it's really great to watch you mature, stay well, Late, eno
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