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Author Topic: Me and Dave H., and trebor999 doing a country song  (Read 409 times)
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« on: April 28, 2011, 02:39:12 AM »

Well Dave composed the music, trebor (Robert) produced it, I wrote the lyrics and performed it. My first time doing country, but it was cool. It's kinda for Military wives who's husbands go off to war, and miliatry husbands who ship off to far away countries to fight them, it's called "Slow Song." Also, looking for some one to do a video to put up on You Tube with this song, anyone interested? Das?

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               Slow Song
                                 Music by Dave Hensley
                    Lyrics By Ron Rentz
                                                                    Produced by Robert Lee Hall

We’ve both become numb, we knew this moment would come
We’ve been counting down time, until I’d have to leave
How quickly it passed, and now a dark shadow’s cast
I’ll be coming home soon, this you’ve got to believe

Play me a slow song , so I can just hold her tight
How can something be wrong, when our hearts feel so right
I’ll be safe you be strong, when you’re scared late at night
Think of dancing our slow song,  and believe that it might…be okay

Her father had told her, please don’t  marry a soldier
When he’s gone you’ll be worried, and he’ll be gone for so long
You said you couldn’t let go of, the one thing you were sure of
You’d stay right by my side because that’s where you belong

Play me a slow song , so I can just hold her tight
How can something be wrong, when our hearts feel so right
I’ll be safe you be strong, when you’re scared late at night
Think of dancing our slow song,  and believe that it might…be okay

I thought of you every moment of every hour everyday
I was thinking of you when I stepped in harms way
Two buddies were wounded, they couldn’t get up and run
So I dug in beside them and started firing my gun
When the battle had ended, and the medics came around
They said niether had seen so much brass on the ground
I took one in the shoulder, and one more in my chest
They said, “hang in there soldier, your going home for a rest.”

The next month was a blur, so I just couldn’t be sure
When I heard your voice say, “now you’re safe so be strong.”
As my eyes opened wide, you were there by my side
You said you saved me this dance, and then they played our slow song


Play me a slow song , so I can just hold her tight
How can something be wrong, when our hearts feel so right
I’ll be safe you be strong, when you’re scared late at night
Think of dancing our slow song,  and believe that it might…be okay



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« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2011, 07:43:00 PM »

Great job to all three of you. Wonderful lyrics Eno. Maybe this could go with some of legend and camo's tribute to the military. Anyway great job guy's Wink
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« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2011, 10:59:51 PM »

Thanks Joe, I've got some big hopes for this tune, like all of them I guess. Late, eno
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« Reply #3 on: April 30, 2011, 11:19:18 PM »

love it, clean production, good job  Cool
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« Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 01:49:23 AM »

Thanks Rod, very much. Dude where do you get all the photos for your videos? I need a source so I can try to put one together for this song. I want to youtube it so that the people who need to hear it can. Throw me a bone bro. Late, eno
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« Reply #5 on: May 02, 2011, 12:56:19 AM »

Wow eno great all round solid production on this one. Take a bow guys Dave awesome backing track bud perfect fit clean and crisp, Robert again with the magic youve turely enhanced the line, (Think of dancing our slow song,  and believe that it might…be okay) specialy lovely the end (be okay) it is really strong bud. Brianeno wow what can i say bud beautiful lyrics awesome vocasl to match and a perfect melody.

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« Reply #6 on: May 03, 2011, 01:07:22 AM »

Thanks Omega, these guys do good work, they make my part easy. Thought it would be nice to write something for the fighting man and his wife or GF. My first time in the country arena, I kind of like it. Thanks again Omega, Late, eno
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« Reply #7 on: May 05, 2011, 04:25:25 PM »

That's a great work! Kudos to this trio all around. Ron - great voice, man. Dave - solid tune. Robert - mix and production and everything else, fine work.
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« Reply #8 on: June 04, 2011, 01:17:08 AM »

Great song... Lyrics are awesom Brianeno...  Great Collab.
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