My songs missing something, any ideas what it is?

[mikefaughnan]

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=907024&SongId=907186

My name is michael and ive been useing jamstudio for a little while. ive posted most of my beats on the forms already. this is a hip hop song im working on and i like it but it needs something and i cant figure it out. someone please help me out here.

[wyotryot]

can't say I'm too much up on hiphop, MF, but I'd say you need to get this sucka into a DAW, top with some chillin vox layer with shots of horn pull up yer sox and be newborn. JS can only do so much, MF. Then it's time to take the next step. You got DAW?

[Rod]

get a good tempo , find a good beat by using two drums and find a good bass run, page 5 is long and repititive, use some different chord progresions and maybe only 8 measures   
http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1008340&SongId=1008487

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=907024&SongId=907186

My name is michael and ive been useing jamstudio for a little while. ive posted most of my beats on the forms already. this is a hip hop song im working on and i like it but it needs something and i cant figure it out. someone please help me out here.