Just a little / need help with 3rds verse

[Omega]

Hello all ive been working out of town for the past months and are finally home for the next 4 weeks then off again lol. anyways i havent been able to create any new songs for obvious reason so i though id start finishing an old one that i started before i left.

as time is short for me and im currently working on other projects i am in need of help finishing the 3rd verse lyrics any additions would be greatfuly welcomed and credited
also this song is open to all singers who would love to sing it and lay down a final version .......... i would greatfully appreciate your help with mixing and mastering of this song Robert if your willing as your skill will greatly enhance the finished version.

ill only be singing a ruff vocal reference for those who would take up the song and will post in the next day or 2


Just a little http://www.box.net/shared/7jxyig2fq8xeg02zyrpl         

Added  15/09/11 Vocal reference this is a ruff n raw version as a guideline for singer  
http://www.box.net/shared/dhx3y4i4e6vr0f4404os

Verse 1
Just a little kiss
Is all I wish
To make every moment
feel like this
All my life
Ive been hoping for
You and me
Together finally
Yeh yeh

Verse 2
You like sunshine
I like rain
Together we make it a
brand new day
Cloudy moments
Never again
bright days are here
Our future seems so clear
If I could get 

Chorus
Just a little kiss
Is all I wish
Just a little hug
to keep the feeling right
There’s Just one thing
We need to add
Just a little spice
To keep the love, alive
With just a kiss

Verse 3 addition by wyo

It’s all me for you
And you for me
That makes an us
For eternity
Hand in hand
And smile for smile
This love will never miss
With just a little kiss


Chorus *2
Just a little kiss
Is all I wish
Just a little hug
to keep the feeling right
There’s Just one thing
We need to add
Just a little spice
To keep the love, alive
With just a kiss

[wyotryot]

Here's my take on Verse3, buddy!


It’s all me for you
And you for me
That makes an us
For eternity
Hand in hand
And smile for smile
This love will never miss
With just a little kiss


I'd love to do a vocal version, Om, if you're okay. I'd like to start with the JS tracks, load it into my DAW, and work on it from there.
I like the tune.

[Omega]

The thrid verse work well bud

Ok wyo would love to hear your vocal version , i leave it in your hands bud feel free to do what ever you think bud. 

here are the links to the music, the song is made up in five parts
The verse are made up of 2 parts no’s 2 and 3

1) Intro
http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1066487&SongId=1066693

2) Top verses (first half of all verses) http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1066486&SongId=1066691

3) Bottom verses ( second half of all verses)
http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1066489&SongId=1066697

4) Drum roll (end of all verses)
http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1066490&SongId=1066699

5) Chorus http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1066488&SongId=1066695

[wyotryot]

Very cool, Om. Your vocal version is a very close to the one I heard in my head and let loose from my lips at work yesterday (i got busted by a client, who heard me singing - I didn't see them watching - and they said, oh boy, karaoke? Can I sing? lol)
I'll get to work real soon.
Cheers.

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi OM,

 I pieced all the parts togeter. Not sure if its right but I was boared ... lol 

http://www.box.net/shared/07edst7y828ce14dnhha

Robert

[Crystal]

I would like to take a shot to sing to this if I may. I just woke up from a four hour nap and I can't go back to sleep just yet. I'll download Omega's Version and take a crack at it. This flu I'm dealing with hasn't affected my voice quite yet. So I'll take a crack at it, and post it up here.

Okay finished...I wanted to add harmonies, but my voice isn't feeling up to it. I guess things are worse than I through...I squeaked through okay through right?

Here's the music with vocal...http://www.box.net/shared/jxoj0de34tet4k2zmsqg

Here's just the vocal...in case Robert wants to tinker with it...http://www.box.net/shared/kz7xff5tj3fsecs1xn4t

[Omega]

Hi OM,

 I pieced all the parts togeter. Not sure if its right but I was boared ... lol 

http://www.box.net/shared/07edst7y828ce14dnhha

Robert

Hi Robert

the song structure is Intro, verse, drum roll, verse, drum roll, Chorus, verse, drum roll, Chorus, chorus. hopes this help