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Omega
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« on: October 22, 2011, 04:39:09 AM »



Is Happiness an illusion

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Verse 1
Oh how was I to know
That the sun
Would lose its glow
Oh and how could I foresee
The prefect rose
Would never  bloom again

Verse2
And how I could
not conceive
Suddenly fear
becomes reality
I guess I didn’t really
want to believe (no)
this is the last time
That ill ever see (her)

Chorus1
I cant stop crying
Deep down inside
my heart is, still denying 
Is happiness an illusion
Is happiness an illusion
With out you

Instrumental

Verse3
I know this is goodbye
This is the last time
The hurt still grows, some how
I know ill be fine
Send me a cure
For the grieving
Because I know I cant
Stop you from leaving

Chorus2
I cant stop crying
Deep down inside
my heart is, still denying 
Is happiness an illusion
Is happiness an illusion
With out you
Is happiness an illusion
Is happiness an illusion
With out you
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« Reply #1 on: October 22, 2011, 07:02:06 AM »

Wow these lyrics hit me hard! Great job! I'll see what I can do to help out
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« Reply #2 on: October 22, 2011, 07:00:58 PM »

thanks GP im currently working on the vocals and hope to have a somewhat finished song soon. its and emotional song conveying my feelings of when my mum past away along time ago.

what i ve done with the lyrics hopefuly has not made it to personal thus keeping it more generalised allowing the listener to relate the song to them in their own circumstances
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« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2011, 07:05:50 PM »


Hi Omega,

 Awesome soundtrak. Look forward to hearing it completed.  Wink

Robert
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« Reply #4 on: October 23, 2011, 05:02:48 AM »


Hi Omega,

 Awesome soundtrak. Look forward to hearing it completed.  Wink

Robert

Thanks for the compliments Robert lets hope the final version does it justice
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« Reply #5 on: October 24, 2011, 09:00:23 PM »

Sounds like another good one coming omega.. I also wrote a song about my mother after losing her to cancer. I'll be looking for the final version.
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« Reply #6 on: November 04, 2011, 11:47:49 PM »


These lyrics really get to the heart Omega.......and the music track is outstanding   Cool Cool Cool Cool..
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« Reply #7 on: November 26, 2011, 04:28:18 PM »

This may be an old topic but I just have to say that I love the lyrics! I can really feel what I think you were going for!
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« Reply #8 on: February 22, 2012, 12:12:08 AM »

Sounds like another good one coming omega.. I also wrote a song about my mother after losing her to cancer. I'll be looking for the final version.


Thanks Jk i will evenutaly make time to finished this hopefuly soon
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« Reply #9 on: February 22, 2012, 12:24:33 AM »


These lyrics really get to the heart Omega.......and the music track is outstanding   Cool Cool Cool Cool..
Dave

Hey thanks dave just hope the vocal section does it justice when i get around to doing it lol.
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« Reply #10 on: February 22, 2012, 12:26:42 AM »

This may be an old topic but I just have to say that I love the lyrics! I can really feel what I think you were going for!

Thanks MG i try to let the vocal create that impression but i guess the lyrics will only enhance it more so thanks for the comment
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