Need Help With Lyrics

[camo]

This is a re-work of one of my old songs. I want to add completely new lyrics, but I keep thinking of the old lyrics, preventing me from coming up with anything new. Any help would be appreciated. The song will end with a fade out in the final mix. Here is the JS music track:

http://www.fileswap.com/dl/vHfnIP4IzK/Untitled.html

[camo]

I changed the key of the song as well as a couple of instruments. I also sped it up a notch. The result allowed new lyrics to form. I had been watching some old war movies over the Veterans day weekend, and I think they (and the occupy Wall street protests) influenced the lyrics. The song asks some poingnant questions. Let me know what you think:

http://www.fileswap.com/dl/vwSWYwfJiA/Red%20White%20And%20Blue%20CD%20Mix.mp3.html

[Ant]

I think the lyrics makes our country sound weak.Our country is nothing like that! Of course you have the right to say what you think.That right is given to you by the USA.

[camo]

It made you think, and it envoked a passionate response just as I hoped it would. I am just playing the devils advocate by asking the question(s). I am glad you responded so positively. I really appreciate the listen and feedback. 

[Ant]