worthy of completion?

[RobertLeeHall]

Hi All,

 Started something and not sure if i can complete it. Looking for any help. Basically it's just the music to the small intro and 1st two verses. It still needs a chorus and bridge.

http://www.jamstudio.com/Mp3Download.asp?Mp3MixName=S1166587_1166823.mp3

http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1166587&SongId=1166823

Robert

[Dave H]

Wow !.....that's excellent Robert !.....fantastic pagework....and the instrument selections are awesome !.....that's JS in the hands a of a great musician !  It's definately worth finishing.... writing 2 more pages and stitching them together in the mixer will be well worth the extra effort on this one.......I'm lovin the vibe so far.....

Dave 

[Das]

One of the best intros I've heard in this forum.

[jkenney]

Definatley worth it robert . That bass is driving it right now, continue with that bass man !

[Rod]

very very very creative, like how you mixed it up

[wyotryot]

Love the 5>4, not nuts about the 2>3, and don't like the 3 in this as it doesn't seem to carry the intent. Overall, very nice where this is headed, but I wouldn't repeat the periscope 2x in a row, but you could delete that sound in the DAW.
Just thoughtin'

[Omega]

Hi Robert

Im loving this Robert so much so i had to add my 2cents worth and thought id put up a remix or 2 hope you dont mind. 

just a couple of subtle changes made to pg 1 and pg3, and definitely worhty of completion

Remix 1 http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1200855&SongId=1201042

Remix 2 http://www.jamstudio.com/Studio/FWSongShare.asp?SongNum=1200865&SongId=1201062